switching song point of view

So I was listening to this song and decided to write how the other person whose point of view isn't shown in the song.     

Here's part of the song:

Hello by Emily Burns

Do you know how many lies I've had to tell my friends?
How many nights I've seen out to the end?
Lost count of the times I've rewritten messages I'll never send
If you knew all the ways I tried to forget
All the days that I've wasted, lyin' in my bed
If you knew that it breaks every little piece of me, each time you leave

Baby, then maybe you wouldn't call
Maybe then you'd just leave me alone

'Cause I can't help but fall apart
Got me right back at the start
Funny how you always know
When I'm 'bout to let you go
You show up and say "Hello"
And I wish that I could block you out
But, damn, you got your timin' down
Funny how you always know
When I'm 'bout to let you go
You show up and say "Hello"

My Version: Goodbye

I’ve heard all the lies you’ve told your friends 

All the nights you’ve stayed out to the end

Why don’t you call or text me anymore?

Oh I've tried to forget

All the times I've tried to replace you

I know it breaks every little piece of you, each time I leave

So forgive me but I just have to call

I can't leave you alone

When I see that you’re moving on 

I just can’t help but fall apart 

Got me right back at the start 

I always know when you’re letting me go

So I show up 

Cause’ I don’t know how to say goodbye 

And I wish you would block me out 

But, damn, I got my timin’ down 

Funny how I always know

When you’re about to let me go

I’ll just show up again

Cause’ I don’t know how to say goodbye