Saturday, March 28, 2020

"The Perfect Balance" (Poem)

The Perfect Balance

Love and trust go hand in hand
without one there cannot be the other
they coexist with a perfect balance

Alone they are fragile
but together 
they stand stronger than any fortress

Love is patient and kind
it does not envy
it celebrates the truth
it always endures the test of time

A lack of trust 
leads to accusations
with no basis for them
sure she says she loves me
but if she did we wouldn’t be here

She calls me a liar and a cheat
but I have never strayed away
I always gave nothing but love and trust
and she couldn’t do the same

A relationship like that can only last so long
but at some point enough
is enough
and it must come to an 
end

Now a new relationship has been built
and I now know true love
both love and trust prevail now
there is no reason to
second guess
so I can truly say,

“I love you”

4 comments:

  1. I like this poem, it is a detailed poem with perfect explanations. I also believe that love and trust go hand in hand since in a relationship that is the main thing. One has to trust the partner for a relationship to work. Material things are not important in a relationship, the most important thing is affection, respect and trust. The person who doesn't value that is that he doesn't really care about your feelings is a materialistic person. Once again good work on your poem.!!!

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  2. This is a beautiful poem that evokes feeling when I read it. The title also goes well with the poem and I really liked how you ended the poem.

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  3. I like this poem and the explanation of it was very clear to understand. The words flow together well and the title of the poem fits well

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