Saturday, March 7, 2020

Poem by me

Wanted to share my poem, what can I improve on ?! Did you like it ?

Hopeless

 Feeling hopeless is not a word 
When you know your worth 
And when everyone knows how much your worth 
Finally your inner self is known as your trust 
Never doubt about your work 
Never doubt about your words
Always remember who you are 
Who you've become
And who makes you, you. 

Hoping for a good tomorrow is your faith
Not believe in a new day is a failure
As I walk into the new day 
I see myself as a new start 
A new start to think 
To take away the good and bad
Never regret my days 
Always keep my head high 
High expectations and high limitations 
Being positive helps 
It helps me to have hope 
To believe in new beginnings
With unexpected endings. 

2 comments:

  1. I like you poem you did a great job in your poem. I like also the explanation of hopleness in your poem. When you said ¨Never doubt about your words, always remember who you are¨ this stanza caught my attention since always we have to know our skills and propuse. Once again great job.

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  2. Wow girl! I really liked this. It shows that as long as you are optimistic, know your worth, and believe in yourself, anything is possible. This was very inspirational. This is something that a lot of people need to hear, because sometimes one might want to give up! However, this poem shows that for you, that's not an option.

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